I want to thank the Fundació Joan Brossa for letting me use them.
Monday, February 4, 2019
1 BATX - LET'S WRITE A POEM
Writing a poem from the scratch is a difficult task; only poets can do it and only great poets can do it well. However, some poet's works can be excellent sources of inspiration; so there we go: this time we are going to use some visual poems by the Catalan poet Joan Brossa (1919-1998).
I want to thank the Fundació Joan Brossa for letting me use them.
I want to thank the Fundació Joan Brossa for letting me use them.
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Are we the person
ReplyDeletethat we show?
How is the person
who is below?
I don't know
if I'm the person that I show.
But I'm sure,
that the pure person
is always below.
Blai Sánchez
(Poem inspireted in Joan Brosa's visual poem: The other one - "L'altre")
Who can it be?
ReplyDeleteIt's me?
Or the other part of me?
A lot of people know me
But no one deeply
I tell myself every single night
that my smile shines so bright
I tell myself to shine like the stars so far away
But I prefer loving yourself
Everytime I say so,
my body goes slow mo
It hurts like hell
It feels like a beautiful pain
Do I care
to loving yourself
every single day?
Andrea Lorite
(Poem inspired in Joan Brossa's visuals poems: "The other one" and "You")
THE TRUTH OF THE LIFE
ReplyDeleteWho can it be?
Does it have a relation with me?
What does it want to show me?
What is your objective?
Does the life have two face?
Good face and dark face?
Do you intend to teach me a lesson?
Which face is right?
The face that show? Or the face that hides?
You are the one
who makes
The rial face.
Yeray Salas
(Poem inspired in Joan Brosa's visual poem: The other one)
What can I do?
ReplyDeleteAre my decisions?
What are my posibilities?
Why is the life random?
Can I mechanize it?
Can I control the randomness?
Who can do that?
Maybe me or anyone?
Reference (poem inspired in the Balldice)- Joan Brossas Poema Objecte
Why do I feel like that?
ReplyDeleteMaybe everything's a map
that I need to follow
to stop feeling that hollow.
What am I supposed to do?
Maybe I'm not ready
to show the whole world
what they want to see.
How can I do it?
I just feel ok with you
because you're my home
the place that I can come
(Poem inspired in Joan Brossa's "L'altre"-1988).
Paula Iniesta Burguillos
What's next?
ReplyDeleteWill it come to visit me?
Where does it come from?
And what if it never arrives?
Which will be its stop?
And what if I am not its stop?
What will be your destination?
What about all your stops?
Am I not the only one?
Or rather I am the chosen one?
Does anyone know if it's my end?
Or is it just a dream?
(Poem inspireted in Joan Brosa's visual poem: The letter train)
Andrea Yánez Cueva
YOU
ReplyDeleteWho can it be?
Just think about it
Only for a second
Who are you?
Who are we?
Are we a paradigm?
Or are we just an image?
Are we lucky?
Or are we guilty?
Do I dare
to think
about it?
Nerea Lorenzo Arranz
(Inspired in Joan Brossa's YOU visual poem)
THE OTHER ONE
ReplyDeleteWho can it be?
Maybe it's me
or it can be you.
Who can I ask
if this is a real mask.
Why is it there?
Why is it in your face?
I can't see your soul
and neither mine.
Properly a bad romance
between you and me
between devil and peace.
Sandra Manchón - 1st BAT A
(Poem inspireted in Joan Brosa's visual poem "The other one")
THIS DAY
ReplyDeleteWhen will the people open the eyes?
When will people notice?
I’m feed up...
But I know that some day,
People will start to have consciousness.
That day, we will break the chains,
We will be unstoppable and...
Finally we will be free.
When will this day come?
Oriol Abellan-Inspirat pel Poema visual (1971-82) de Joan Brossa
Something
ReplyDeleteWhat can it be?
Is it my soul inside?
Or is it him who controls my mind?
Do we live in symbiosis?
Or is it just like a metamorphosis?
Personality that I hide?
My internal dark side?
Do I have to resist?
Is it false and it doesn't exist?
Do I have
To control
It?
Poem inspired in Joan Brossa’s THE OTHER ONE
Mykhailo Yakyma
1 BATX A
Who can it be?
ReplyDeleteCould it be me?
Is it a family person?
Is it a double identity?
Or a "assasin"?
Or a "criminal"?
An imposible love capture?
A face of my future?
A future of desolation?
The lies of the life?
The mask of the truth?
And do I dare
To discover
It?
POEM INSPIRED IN JOAN BROSSA'S "THE OTHER ONE"
DANNA MIRANDA-1ST BATH B
Sea
ReplyDeleteWhat is the sea?
Is it only water?
Is it where our food luves in?
Is it a part of our planet?
Or is it another world?
An do I care to explore it?
Poem inspired in Joan Brossa's poem: "key poem"
Joel Pinteño Ruiz
MAGIC KEY
ReplyDeleteHow can it be?
Oh let me see
Give me some tea
And I'll fine the key
What can it be?
Heart of an artist
That unlocks a new door
That unlocks a new world
Like a multicolour rainbow
One complete world
Hundred beautiful words
Thousand kilos of gold.
POEM INSPIRED IN JOAN BROSSA'S "VISUAL POEM"
HUIYING LIN 1ST BAT A
MYSTERY
ReplyDeleteI found it in my mailbox
Inside a white box
What can it be?
Is it for me?
Is it a mask?
Or are the two mask?
Will it be from someone?
Will it hide a machine gun?
I'm so confused
Why is this here?
I'm frustrated
Give me a beer
Now
Everything is clear
Wow
It's my disguise!
Poem inspired in Joan Brossa's THE OTHER ONE.
Liren Siles 1r Batx A
Wha is it?
ReplyDeleteWhere is the nine?
Could it be in this dice?
How many numbers does it have?
Maybe just number two
or the number five?
I just want to see a normal dice
What is the number
that the dice is showing me?
It is the number one
the chossen one
And do I dare to change it?
Poem inspired in Joan Brosa's visual poem: The square
Carla Moppi 1r BATX A
What open's everything?
ReplyDeleteEverything is opened by one thing
What thing can that be?
That thing that if you lose it...
You lose everything
Do you already know the answer?
You just have to unlock your thoughts
With what object can you open them?
That key always open's all the ways
And should I
Find the
Key?
POEM INSPIRED IN JOAN BROSA'S "KEY"
IRENE TORTOSA MACANAZ 1r BATX B
What can It be?
ReplyDeleteWho sends this?
Is It for me?
Is It for another?
It can be a animal?
Can It be a threat criminal?
A mini gift ball?
A invitation to playing football?
And I risk
opening
It?
Poem inspired in Joan Brossa's"THE OTHER ONE"
ALEJANDRO PRIETO GARCIA - 1BATX B
Different faces
ReplyDeleteWho can it be
The person with two feelings?
Maybe happy, maybe sad.
The one with a rock soul.
People talks about him.
Or maybe her.
But it's still with two mentalities.
He don't like to talk.
She prefers to be alone.
He wants to scream.
She's still quiet.
A war between them will explode.
And then, they will not talk about them.
Neither him, nor her.
Do I dare to ask again
Who can it be
The person without feelings?
Poem inspired in Joan Brossa's "The other one"
Laura Matamala-1st Ba A
FACE TO FACE
ReplyDeleteWho can it be?
Are you tired of being me?
Which one should be?
The shy one or the social one?
Who will win the final race,
to go to the surface?
Show to the world,
that the both of you,
are valuable and worth it.
You don't have to change a thing
to shine and embrace,
the world that you deserve.
Do I dare
to say it
face to face?
POEM INSPIRED IN JOAN BROSA'S POEM "THE OTHER ONE"
SONIA DÍAZ GONZÁLEZ 1r BATX A
FAKE FACE
ReplyDeleteWhat can it be?
Is it a man?
Is it a mask?
What do you want to tell me?
Are we all fake?
Won't someone lie?
What does that mean?
Is it done at random?
I don't get it
What do you want me
to do
with that?
-POEM INSPIRED IN JOAN BROSA'S POEM "THE OTHER ONE"-
Nerea Vázquez Reyes-1st BAT A
Misterious Man
ReplyDeleteWhat can it be?
Is it a man?
Is it a shadow?
Or an illusion?
Or is it a real monster?
A personification of a spirit?
A simple shield?
And do I dare
To reveal
It?
-POEM INSPIRED IN JOAN BROSA'S POEM "THE OTHER ONE"-
Badr Ouabid- 1st BAT A
THIS IS ME
ReplyDeleteWho can it be?
Is this me?
Is this real?
Am I exactly where I'm supposed to be now?
Now I found who I am
There's no way to holding it
This is me
And do I dare
To show
It
To the world?
(poem inspired in Joan Brosa's THE OTHER FACE)
Mysterious Face
ReplyDelete-----------------
What can it be?
Is a real face?
Is it the mask of the dark man?
Is it the face of the bright women?
I don't know.
I'm very confused.
Please help me,
brightnes women.
I'm lost in the life.
Please help me,
the dark man.
I'm empty.
Please help me...
(Poem inspired in Joan Brossa's "The other one")
Miguel Hurtado Diaz, 1st Batx A
What is it?
ReplyDeleteIt's myself? Or it's just a shell?
Is it real?
Or it's just fear?
Does people know?
Do I show?
We'll keep going on
Alone
By my own.
Blanca garcia
Hidden me
ReplyDeleteWho can it be?
maybe it's me
but maybe it's not me.
Maybe it is a reflection of me,
or my darkness trying to leave
an other face trying to show something that can't be,
or it's me showing something that can't it be?
I don't know who it can be
but i know that is me
trying to hide the reality of me.
An do I dare
to show
the reality
of me?
(Poem inspired in Joan Brossa's "The other one").
Luis Parés, 1st Batx A
OUR LOVE
ReplyDeleteWhat it can be?
Where does it has to be?
Is it about me?
Or is it about the sea?
I wanna know
what you think
when you are alone
and when you are with me
If someday
you get tired of wait
you are able to take your car
And go away
(Poem inspired in Joan's Brosa's poem 'The other one')
Paula Civantos, 1 Batx A
Key-lash
ReplyDeleteWhat ca it be?
Is it a gift?
is it a special key?
Or it's a key to all knowledge?
Or the key that will open all the doors?
With this key can I open the door of your heart?
And do I dare
To discover
It?
(Poem inspired in joan Brossa's "Visual Poem" or "The Key")
Kailash Saire, 1 Batx A
Who I am?
ReplyDeleteMaybe I have two identities
or maybe i'm always the same?
And I change depending on the game,
the game of the truth
or the lies?
Who I am?
But my identity never dies
we always change
sometimes
Alejandro Moragrega Laez 1Bat B
Poem inspired in Joan Brossa's poem (The other one)
THE REAL ME
ReplyDeleteI feel locked,
There’s something out there?
I can’t see
I’m covered of fears
Where can I be?
I can’t move
I must escape
I got to go outside
I don’t want more hide
This must be a trap
Is that light what I see?
I’m out,
I’m free
Now I’m the real me.
Joel Pérez Segués 1r BAT A
Poem inspired in Joan Brossa's poem ( The Other one )